Erg.
The only thing that sounded good was the beat, which, chances are, you didn't completely construct yourself. I also hear stolen melodies in this one too.
Take no offense to my reviews, I just think its time for a huge change in your music making.
DJ API
Yuck.
I'm sorry, but nothing in this song worked. The vocals from one of the Cool Stuff songs just did NOT fit into this song. The melody didn't go along with the vocals at ALL. Also, the stolen melody from "Maybe" makes you lose points too.
I expect better out of you.
DJ API
Pretty good.
It took a while to get into the beat, which wasn't the greatest beat I've ever heard. The kick was a bit too fruityloops sounding. The all your base are belong to us voice track completely screwed up the experience.
Otherwise, this song was pretty good. It'd be really cool if you got your hands on some higher quality synths. The arp in the beginning was good sounding, but the saw didn't sound as good. It was too weak. The melody was really good, but it needs to be a little more varied.
Good luck in the future,
DJ API
Well youre right in some Cases, a bit harsh though! but i do use Fruityloops ! so no problem there, and im working on those vocals, cause thats the most difficult part !
But thnx for comment ! ;-)
Catchy.
This was relatively well done, the only things I would fix are the hihat, being DNC_hat 1, sounded really cheesy. The piano clip was nudged toward the left channel, making it sound kind of awkward. I can still dig it though. This isn't your best hip hop beat.
-API-
I don't do hip-hop so therefore... You know how it goes. ;)
Excellent.
The whole thing was really well composed, the only thing that'd I'd change was that a low string synth was only in the left channel, and that res-clippy synth. It was way too loud. Other than that, this was a wonderful track. I liked the drums. Alot of automation going on I supposed. I think you took my advice and raised the low-end. Did alot of good, huh?
I'm looking forward to seeing more, you are one of the most talented people on the Audio Portal.
-API-
Turns out that sometimes my knobs turn themselves out of nowhere. <_< >_> And my saved presets I got sometimes are tilted to one channel. So I gotta watch out for those. I'll prolly end up centering them and then overwriting them. And the 303 was loud... The balance on my speakers were off so it was centered when I listened until I saw my knob down there is off too! Damn knobs.
And I kinda did take your advice and didn't. What I did was actually use some mastering stuff and it made everything peachy-keen. As for me being one of the most talented... I'm not too sure on that one. There's lots of people with potential out there. Some have more than others but most of us are just making music to kill time while we're in highschool, right? At least, I am.
Why in the hell...
did you submit this? There's no point. There are a bunch of mp3's of the FL5 music anyway. You aren't supposed submit anyone elses work anyway. You lose. This song also has a horrible 3/4 time signature. It'd be SO much better with a 4/4.
sorry
Wow.
Very clean sounding. May I ask what program you use? This sounded very very good. I love the the chordy string. Sounds kinda like a guitar strum.
Hawt song,
<3 API
FL 5 all the way! hehe, there where a few extra VST plugins I got though. Thanks for the review!
Nice.
This is wrongly classified though. Put it under hip-hop. DnB is much faster than this, with deeper and grittier bass.
ya im realy not good at classifying my music so i asked my friend and he said db.
Meh.
The whole song sounded a little disconnected. The distorted bass sample didn't fit in with the rest of the song. The strings did not compliment the drums or bass at all. I might wanna work on that just a little.
G'day,
API
Well yeah everyone's opinion but the thing here is its called Breakcore ... IOW total chaos :) you have to think away from the drums and bass and whatsoever and try to find a rythem within the total chaos
Then if you found my message in this sound you've become a real coredemon :D
I make drum and bass which I upload on www.myspace.com/geie rmusic. I do not submit work here anymore, and you can feel free to use any of my stuff on Newgrounds. Just be aware that it does not represent my current work at all.
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