The whole thing was really well composed, the only thing that'd I'd change was that a low string synth was only in the left channel, and that res-clippy synth. It was way too loud. Other than that, this was a wonderful track. I liked the drums. Alot of automation going on I supposed. I think you took my advice and raised the low-end. Did alot of good, huh?
I'm looking forward to seeing more, you are one of the most talented people on the Audio Portal.