Don't take this personally, but...
The track lacked a polish that many people who come here seek. The piece sounded just like a whole bunch of synths mashed together and it could've been better.
If you want to make a successful track, try and make the drums more prominent and don't forget to seperate certain melodies so that they don't clash. Since Rock seems to be what you submit most, I'm guessing you aren't that into electronic music. So just stick to the rock. The rock is alright.
Try messing around with filters and seperating parts of the track so they don't jumble.
Good luck in the future,